Should I

Should I write you a poem
while I am thinking of you
while you are walking in my feelings
like in your apartment
in the attic
with the view
on the city lights

Should I tell you
I want you
when
I want you
some short flashing pictures
in front of the eyes
you
and
me
on the living room floor
hugged
united
un-satiationed

Should I tell you
that your hands
are still touching me
like the hot
lava that
expels from the
burning
volcano throat

I see your face
your eyes
your lips
I hear your voice
that tells
you are too beautiful
that tells me
stop
just to
stare into
my eyes

Should I tell you
come
To admit to you
that I am
whispering
that word
like
you could
hear it

Or to remain silent
of this wish
that you
woke up
in me
surprisingly
without question
stormily
and
ripping it out
of
the matrix
of
space
and
time.........

4 comments:

orgasmik said...

i love these lines...

"Should i write you a poem
while i thinking of you
while you are walking in my feelings"
i think they are simply beautiful!

i did read all your others posts too...and i hope peace and love will belong again to you!

hugs

j

Lavinia said...

thank you, J... :)

some separations are better than staying together, yet, the emptiness remaining afterward sometimes can be heavy to bear..

but that same emptiness may become a great teacher.. with the freedom to chose a new and most truly wanted direction of life and living..

i am looking forward to finding that.. hope to find peace and love on that journey - again, as you have kindly wished for me ...

love to you too,
hope you are fine :)
Lavi

SarahA said...

There is only one puzzlement for me in this piece 'un-satying' Please to educate me and my poor brain. For this is beautiful, you.I am loving how she links and the whole feel of being washed along with her.

Lavinia said...

yes, perhaps i've mistaken the word "satiation" - so the opposite of that - should be?

btw thank you for your visits and very kind comments, really appreciate that.
love,
lavi

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